Thursday, April 30, 2015

Soldier-Moment in Time

WALT: Use adjectives (describing words) to make our writing interesting to the reader.
We pretended we were a soldier in the war, using our senses to describe what it was like.

I saw...soldiers shooting guns and shooting at lots of people.
I heard...blasting guns killing people.
I felt...red gluely sticky blood on my skin.
I wondered...what soldiers are died in the war.